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At present the site
does not promote the company and what the company does. It skirts around
explaining the business you are in and the services you are selling.
When you look at competitors they
Aggressively explain that they rent vehicles and sell other services. You make no clear statement of intent or position the company in the business environment in which you are competing.
A lot of the information required to develop a better functioning persona for your company is already there, but it needs to be reworked and presented in a manner that is easily accessible to the viewer.
The only shortfall
is quality visual imagery. Last week Nix Stacey began to take some good images, but these may need to be added to with specific images (brush manufacture, brush parts for sale with white